INT. ALISA’S FRONT ROOM- DAY
Alisa is in her house having arrived home from the chase, she is still panicking and knows that she has to let a friend realise she’s in danger; she picks up the phone and dials a friend.
ALISA TITAN
Hi, it’s me, I need your help.
ALISA’S FRIEND (don’t actually hear them speak)
You sound worried, what’s wrong?
ALISA TITAN
These two guys are after me, I think they’re trying to kill me; I have no idea who they are.
NARRATOR: Two guys
EXT. ALISA’S FRONT GARDEN- DAY
Alex and Jack are outside with the gun trying to aim their shot.
ALEX TITAN
I can’t see her, we’re going to need to go around the back and kill her instead
NARRATOR: One Target
EXT. ALISA’S CAR- DAY
Alisa is exiting her car.
NARRATOR: One Goal
EXT. THE MOORS- DAY
The chase takes them all to the moors where Alisa speeds up and escapes, the men start to slow down and then realise that they’re run out of petrol so they start arguing.
ALEX TITAN
I didn’t stop the car it’s run out of petrol because ‘someone’ didn’t fill it up!!
JACK TITAN
I thought that you were filling it up!
ALEX TITAN
I asked you too!
JACK TITAN
Well I didn’t think that we’d be in a chase
EXT. THE MOORS- DAY
Jack and Alex are doing target practice.
ALEX TITAN: You are using blanks aren’t you?
JACK TITAN: Of course I am
INT. ALISIA’S HOUSE- DAY
ALISIA: I’ll go and pack now and get out of here.
ALEX TITAN: Oh my god, you just shot her!!
NARRATOR: Until it all goes wrong.
INT. ALISA’S KITCHEN- DAY
ALEX TITAN: Ahhh!
NARRATOR: Graham Rice
INT. ALEX’S CAR- DAY
ALEX TITAN: Oh my God!
EXT. MOORS- DAY
ALEX TITAN: Is no-one going to pick us up?
ALEX TITAN: Ahh, God!
JACK TITAN: We’re going to have to get rid of her somewhere.
ALEX TITAN: We’re going to have to bury her.
NARRATOR: Jon Rice
EXT. ALISA’S BACK GARDEN- DAY
ALEX TITAN: It’s too high powerful at close range.
JACK TITAN: I don’t think we need a gun anyway.
ALEX TITAN: She’s a lot more tasty than she looks.
NARRATOR: The 2 Goons.
EXT. MOORS- DAY
ALEX TITAN: Well Jack, I’ve managed to bury the hitchhiker.
JACK TITAN: You can’t leave it like that, look at it. If you’re going to bury it bury it, you can see half of her.
I decided to do a script for my trailer because:
- My actors weren't sure exactly what they had to do because i was explaining it to them as i went along. So providing them with a script allowed them to have more direction and structure with their acting, therefore allowing them to give a more convincing performance.
- Also it meant that when filming scenes from a range of different angles i could cut from one angle to another whilst the dialogue was still flowing. This makes the trailer more effective as the quick cuts keep the audience more engaged. For example if one of the characters said an improvised line but i needed to re-shoot from another angle they might not be able to remember the line therefore making difficult to cut part way through a shot.
No comments:
Post a Comment